1. Redmonkey1313 Builder
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    It is only partially finished. I can be criticized so tell me if u hate it!






    Andrewkm, can we go pick shopping?


    I need a diamond pick, only got $20 in my balance.
    I-I-I'm huntin'
    Looking for a deal,
    This is so much fun.

    Walk into a spawn shop like what up I need a d-pick,
    Gotta go mining so I need one real quick.
    Prices in the shop are so expensive,
    People like wow, that's real expensive.
    Sprinting to the sg, dressed in all blue Cept' my boots those are gray.
    Draped in a new skin,made by Andrewkm.
    Probably should of repaired my diamond sword, but hey I'm broke!
    If I get caught with it, I'll be knocked for it.
    But I'm about to get some compliments.
    Giving out these leather boots that someone else beens walking in.
    Saving my money and I'm so happy.
    Oh crap, I'm stuck in a lava trap.
    I need a diamond pick, I need a diamond pick.
    No, for real ask your friends can I have their diamond pick.
    Diamond tunic, and some d-boots
    Whole stack of coal that I found diggin'.
    They had a damaged sword, I bought a damaged sword.
    I got a free house, ohhh what a score.
    Hello, hello my favorite server
    PvP ain't got nothing on this server heck no.
    I can take diamond sword, make it cool sell that.
    The minecraft heads will be like,
    "How'd he get that?"

    I need a diamond pick, only got $20 in my balance.
    I-I-I'm huntin'
    Looking for a deal,
    This is so much fun.
    I need a diamond pick, only got $20 in my balance.
    I-I-I'm huntin'
    Looking for a deal,
    This is so much fun.

    Watcha know about rockin a enchanted diamond pick.
    Watcha know about wearin diamond armor.
    I'm searching, I'm searching, I'm searching right through the shops.
    Cause one mans pick that's another mans come up.
    Thank your friend for donating a kit for me, cause right now in winnin' sg.
     
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    This is what I WOULD change, you don't have to.



    And btw, this song is way way way way way way way too short, you need to make a parody sentence for almost every line, maybe missing a few but you should work on this more.
     
  3. Laxcd11 Builder
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    Very cool and creative! :)
     
  4. Redmonkey1313 Builder
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    Thank you
     
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    This is good!