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  1. DevotedToChrist Builder
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    Users Involved in this Contract:
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    General Purpose of Contract:
    The remodeling and construction of a melon farm.

    I (the contract initiator) agree to the following terms, and agree that my failure to complete such terms will result in a breach of contract, as outlined in Rule 3:
    Within 24 hours of the approval of this contract and membership given to the town of Sedona, @DevotedToChrist will begin to construct:

    - A 200x200x11 melon farm with all materials required being supplied by @DevotedToChrist and incorporated into the cost.
    - After the construction or remodeling of each floor into a melon farm, @DevotedToChrist will provide via pm to @Phantomine a bill equivalent to the amount and type of blocks used. The cost of each floor cannot be in excess of $28,116 based on a floor detailing exactly 1,911 glowstone, 5,675 stonebrick, and and 15,288 melon seeds, and only eleven floors are to be constructed.
    - Each floor must be completed within two weeks of the last floor's bill being posted over pm, or two weeks from when this contract is initially accepted.

    The other user(s) involved with this contract must agree to the following terms:
    - Within 24 hours of this contract, membership to the town of Sedona will be given by @Phantomine to @DevotedToChrist in order to immediately begin construction.
    - Upon the completion of each floor within the expressed specifications, @Phantomine will pay @DevotedToChrist the expressed value of that floor stated within its bill, seeing that it adheres to the expressed specifications of construction stated within this contract.
    - All bills must be paid by @Phantomine within two weeks of the completion and billing of a floor.

    I agree that the terms in this contract are subject to all of EcoCityCraft's rules, including the rules listed specifically in this forum. I understand that the contract may be affected by future changes in EcoCityCraft rules and server updates, and I accept that due to the possibility of such changes, this contract may be at my own risk. I understand that the contents of this contract are subject to staff assessment, review and approval before it is a binding contract under EcoCityCraft rules. I accept that action may not be taken in case of a breach of contract if appropriate and sufficient evidence is not provided of such.: Yes, I agree to these terms.
     
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    Please be more specific with these time frames.
    Maybe this is just me, but it doesn't seem very clear what this means. I'd appreciate it if you re-worded or clarified the meaning of this.

    @Phantomine will need to re-sign the contract once changes have been made.
     
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    I, as another party to this contract, agree to the terms laid out for me to uphold, and understand that failure to complete such terms will result in a breach of contract:
    Yes, I agree.
     
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    Eek, what the timeframe was designed to be after I completed each floor (which cannot take longer than two weeks per floor), in which case Phanto will be paying an amount equivalent or less than $28,116 depending on the amount of materials utilized within each floors, and in total there will be 11 such floors.

    I looked at the contract last night and I'm kind of struggling to offer a clearer time frame, as all I can think to do within the contract is state the initiation of the contract (which is as soon as its approved), the time by which payments must be made (at the completion of each of the floors), and the closing of the contract (after the completion of a total of 11 floors).

    Could you help me by recommending where I should make the edits, should you still think we need them, in order to offer a better timeframe for the contract? If you would like, I could place an umbrella time limit over the entire project to take absolutely no longer than four months lest the remaining payments for each floor be forfeit for me, and also to make the overall price for the entire project no greater than $309,276 (the maximum cost of building all eleven floors).
     
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    You see , when you use 'upon' it usually means right after something happens, for instance 'upon contract approval' = as soon as contract is approved. To ensure nothing happens we get time frames such as 'Within 24 hours of contract approval' or 'Within 24 hours of a floor built' as both users may not be online at the same time. I recommend using within X hours usually.
     
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    I edited the contract and substituted "within 24 hours" as 7am suggested for all areas stating "upon the approval of this contract". Please let me know if this will be sufficient :)
     
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    I, as another party to this contract, agree to the terms laid out for me to uphold, and understand that failure to complete such terms will result in a breach of contract:
    Yes, I agree.
     
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    I carefully went through the contract again, and found some parts which seems confusing as there are some contradictions. I'll highlight my points by quoting you and having red texts in quotes, and following with an explanation and a way we can fix it.

    This part can be re-worded better by stating "Within 24 hours of receiving perms to the town of Sedona" . Furthermore for the second part, will construct hints that within 24 hours you will have constructed a melon farm (of following conditions), I recommend putting in the words 'will begin to construct' rather than will 'construct'.
     
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    I made the suggested changes, let me know if there's anything else I should add or edit :)
     
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    I, as another party to this contract, agree to the terms laid out for me to uphold, and understand that failure to complete such terms will result in a breach of contract:
    Yes, I agree.
     
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    Sorry for being buggy , missed something out.

    Missed the word approval here at the end. Otherwise , all good.
     
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    Edited as requested :)
     
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    I, as another party to this contract, agree to the terms laid out for me to uphold, and understand that failure to complete such terms will result in a breach of contract:
    Yes, I agree.
     
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    *crosses fingers* ;)
     
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    All seems good, remember to take screenshots of every transaction, double tapping F2 for timestamps.


    Locked, approved
     
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