Guys.

In the 6th grade, one person in my class got to read a graduation essay. I happened to get second place, with this essay:

Dear Crestview Staff, Students, and Parents,

Today, as I begin my preparation into a new educational, emotional, and physical journey, I think, "Where has the time gone?" Now, after putting serious thought into this, I realize something: All of my educational and social life, as far back as I can remember, I have poured myself into the glass of Crestview. I realize that, though I spend many hours on other things, my life has always revolved around Crestview. My point here is that the magnitude of sorrow is so unbearable when I realize I have been here for seven years and now have to depart.

However, I often look away from the sadness and look at the joyous events that occurred, such as earning seventy-five dollars for doing a science project at the Arbor Day Fair, winning first place in the 6th grade Quiz Bowl... I could name
countless things, but the most important time is here and now. I have lived yesterday, and know naught of what tomorrow may bring.

Being here, seeing all of these familiar faces reminds me of a day not too long ago, in 4th grade. In fourth grade, I was not my usual self. I was getting 90's, then 80's, on my tests. During that time, things were happening that were stressing me out. Then, my fourth grade teacher, Mr. Ash, said something I would never forget: "How come you aren't getting 100% on your tests recently? I know you can. Try harder." Try harder I did. In fifth grade, and especially sixth grade, I tried my hardest, and achieved new heights that to me were once thought impossible.

I also remember, quite frequently nowadays my main and greatest teacher, Ms. Rede. I could and still can talk openly about my fears anytime, and whenever I didn’t understand how to do something, or I thought something wasn’t fair, she would always be there to explain and talk to me. She was the most hilarious teacher ever and always making comedy out of things like mathematics.

Mrs. Rowe was also an amazing teacher. She was always the person I’d go to during the extra Friday recess and strike up a conversation about anything and everything. As a teacher, she can explain anything in a way that you can almost immediately understand.

Students were also important in my life. I can call almost all of them my friends,
and without them , there would be no joy in school. Need someone to play with? My friends are there. Need to talk to someone who can understand my problems? Any student can help. All of my fellow students and friends help me and are there for me when I need to rely on someone who understands me.

My overall point here is that not only Crestview but also its staff, students, and overall curriculum helped me achieve my goals in life. Let us not dwell in the horrible and evil past, but embrace the beautiful past and remember it for the rest of your life. Finally, I would like to say a last goodbye to the faithful staff, PTA, volunteers, and my fellow students. Thank you.

What do you guys think?

 

Thank you very much.