I dislike the 3D text. It also looks very... Unpolished? Like you just slabbed text onto some image you found on Google.
I'm not an expert, but it looks ok to me. I'm pretty sure Andrew's not going to use it though. But for a first/second/tenth try, it's ok. If you need some photoshop help, ask Jetscat, he's the photoshop master !
, you know how small avatars are, i had to resize the render too far, i know how you feel, because its the same as me