#1ecocitycraft presents the story corner

Here's a copy and paste from my dream log thread

 

From the Sky to the Underwater World

Among the magnificent white clouds,
toward the surface of the Earth,
below the airplane,
upon pulling the string, a billowing parachute pops open,
onto the surface of the ocean,
below the surface of the sea,
into the cold depths of the ocean
toward an underwater cave,
around an environment of colorful underwater vegetation,
in the tangle of seaweed,
on the beautiful sea floor,

I wrote this Poem. You will notice that each phrase begins with a preposition.

 

I have questions about the stuff in red;
What is "balance,peace" (I'm guessing you mean; Long ago when there was balance and peace)
What is "role Storm" (I'm guessing you meant to put a period after role)
What is "ment" (I'm guessing meant)
What is "oxagen" (I'm guessing oxygen)

Grammar is important, I don't care what you say and other people would agree with me. I don't want to make you angry or make you feel down, I'd just like to help you understand that if people can't understand what you are trying to type, what's the point? I could help correct it at the end too if you'd like, but knowing you, you will say no.

GRAMMAR IS IMPORTANT!!!!!!

I really hope this is not bending Rule #5, but I just want you to understand that.
Other than my rant I'd like to hear more of your story as I can tell what you are trying to get by as well as other people who aren't the greatest in English class. It's not bad to be bad in English, but it's not good either.

 

Wanna here a terrible story?
I don't even know why I wrote this...


It’s night.
You find yourself woken up by a strange sound.
You look at the clock.
2:39am.
You listen carefully to the sound.
It’s a crunching noise.
It sounds like it’s coming from the dining room.
You get out of bed and slowly walk towards the dining room.
The noise is getting louder.
You start to feel very frightened.
You reach the entrance to the dining room.
You see the floor.
Cornflakes and Rice Bubbles everywhere.
Your hands are shaking and your legs are weak.
You feel sick.
There’s someone there.
A figure dressed in black.
He’s eating Muesli out of a bowl.
Milk drips from his mouth
In his hand he holds a spoon.
He sees you and turns towards you.
His cold, dark eyes resemble Fruit Loops.
He gets up, walks over to you.
You want to scream, run away.
But you can’t.
You’re frozen.
He gets closer.
You can smell the Weet-Bix in his breath.
And suddenly you find yourself face to face with…

The Cereal Killer.

 

I just hate how characters in horror movies and stories are so dumb.
They do stupid things like live in a house where ''legend has it that it is haunted and stuff''
They do stupid things like walk toward the mysterious noise or sound to check out what it is.
They do stupid things like get a knife when a gunman is at your door.
They do stupid things like tripping when a scary thing is running after them.
They don't even pee their pants, when I would if I were them.

If a hotel is creepy and looks scary, get out of it, don't think about staying!
You know, If you hear a mysterious or creepy noise in the halllway or in a room, don't go there then! And If I were you I would chuck a frickin C4 through the door If I needed to go there. (for good measure of course)
If you were in a scary story, don't be stupid. Be a normal person and carry on.

A ghost in your house?
Blow the house up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That's what tnt in minecraft is for.
This is . . . Minecraft!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

You know what im going to do?

Before I approach the room, I would throw a grenade in there first. Becuz I would know something scary is there. So do what I do - ''Ewww Get it off!''

Cereal killer in your house? Throw a bomb filled with milk at him! Or take a shotgun and blow his face off. And then invite friends in your house for a party. Why would you approach a scary noise anyway? Just blow it up.